Saturday 13 February 2010

Long Distance Romance or Too Far?

ok so this is the first song ive been working on i wrote it last night it kinda started out as something i'm going through personally then i twsited it abit n its gone off on a little bit of a tangent so there could be alternate meanings to it depends which way you look at it... enjoy
Long distance romance
Yet you’re metres away
I could reach out and touch you
If you only knew I was here
You’re too perfect for me
But I’m too good for you
So get outa my head
Please set me free

Chorus 1
Too far, it’s too far for me to reach
Too much it’s too much for me to change
Too hard it’s too hard for me to breathe.
Too far you’re too far away

It sounds far too easy
To just let you go
You’re all around me
Ready to my smother thoughts
Why can’t you leave me be
Try to let live my life
I don’t need constant reminders
Of what might have been

Chorus 2
Too far it’s too far for me to reach
Too wrong it’s wrong to feel like this
Too right it’s too right to be real
Too far you’re too far away

Bridge
What’s the point in starting something?
When you’re miles away
I can feel my heart starting to break
Cos you’re here everyday
To keep from starting something
We built a screen between us
But it can’t stop our emotions
Not the pain that you cause

Chorus 1 + 2
Too far, it’s too far for me to reach
Too much it’s too much for me to change
Too hard its too hard for me to breathe.
Too far you’re too far away
Too far it’s too far for me to reach
Too wrong it’s wrong to feel like this
Too right it’s too right to be real
Too far you’re too far away
i am craving your opinions so please please comment i really really wanna know what y'all think it would mean a real lot to me
and also i need youre help naming it... 'long distance romance' or 'too far'? im gunna set up a poll so please vote and it will be called whatever y'alll decide
DONT FORGET TO COMMENT IT WOULD MEAN A LOT!

2 comments:

  1. That's amazing Charlie!!! Jeeze, are you just good at everything! haha Love Yahh xxx <333

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  2. It's really good, I like it, but can you please correct the poll seeing as it is "too farr", it drives me insane! lol

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